Insane number of visits but few messages...

[Kayman]

I recently created a new profile on a dating site with one of the username suggested in the manual. The result was amazing! More than 30 girls checked out my profile during just one evening, but only 2 of them sent me a message. Seems like something is wrong somewhere, but where?

Is it due to the fact that I have no profile photo with my face? I uploaded 2 photos to an album, where you can see my body. I´m far from fat, so it could not be those pictures that made the girls run away.

Or was my presentation to arrogant? Here is my presentation:
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I have neither the time nor the inclination to write a lot of drivel about my sick personality. Send a mess instead, but at your own risk ...

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What do you think? Would a profile photo with my face improve the result? Or should I change the presentation?

Sincerely,

Kayman

[Overlord Pimp]

Hi Kayman,

Your attitude in the presentation is good, but you take it to far. The trick is to write something really quite normal where this shines through... Thus giving it a more honest look. Think like this: Who do you want to be and what would that person write?

As I understand it you did the first part already and figured out who you want to be online, but then you described that person from your own point of view? Now that kind of spoils it doesn't it?

So rewrite the presentation. The pictures are probably OK.

Good luck